tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28256217.post43632896691720169..comments2023-10-07T14:22:04.085+05:30Comments on अंतर्नाद: आसमानी ओस...विश्व दीपकhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10276082553907088514noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28256217.post-61103764684333589302009-02-04T17:35:00.000+05:302009-02-04T17:35:00.000+05:30mazaaa aa gaya padhh kar bhaai jisach kahe...........mazaaa aa gaya padhh kar bhaai ji<BR/><BR/><BR/>sach kahe........to pahli baarish me aasmaani bundo ko chakhhne me jo khushi milti hai...kuchh waisi baat mehsoos hui hume<BR/><BR/>Bahutt arrse baad ITTTTTTTNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIII madhur rachnaa ki hai aapne ( as a matter of fact....ye madhurataa kaaf isamay se chhupaa rakhhe the aap khud tak!!!!)<BR/><BR/>jo personal comments the wo to hum aapko pahle hi de chuke :-)<BR/><BR/>yahaan basss yahi kahenge........ki Please Write manny manny manny more such poetries!!!<BR/><BR/>Ye mann me 1 umang sa jagaa deti hai!!!!<BR/><BR/>PS. : dont Try to do EMOSANAL ATYACHAAR on me 4 comentings!!!!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17146971220598435455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28256217.post-6502997801833632072009-02-03T18:28:00.000+05:302009-02-03T18:28:00.000+05:30deepak ji,lay me to bas majaa aa gayaa...............deepak ji,<BR/>lay me to bas majaa aa gayaa............har tarah se umdaa...behtreeen .......<BR/><BR/>waah....manuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11264667371019408125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28256217.post-68105606363941466532009-02-02T23:58:00.000+05:302009-02-02T23:58:00.000+05:30tanha bhai,chhote chand baandhna bahut kathik kary...tanha bhai,<BR/>chhote chand baandhna bahut kathik kary hai. aur aapne bahut achcha likha hai. Poem me thodi aur intensity ho sakti thi.<BR/>Likhte rahiye.<BR/>AlokAlok Shankarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03808522427807918062noreply@blogger.com